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*Image of The Nativity by Pixabay. MOST BEAUTIFUL CHRISTMAS POEM (Pre The Epiphany) THE WORLD VERSION: Twelve Drummers Drumming. Eleven Pipers Piping. Ten Lords A-Leaping. Nine Ladies Dancing. Eight Maids A-milking. Seven Swans A-swimming. Six Geese A-laying. Five Golden Rings. Four Calling Birds. Three French Hens. Two Turtle Doves. AND The Partridge in the Pear Tree. THE WORD VERSION: Twelve Doctrine Defense. Eleven Resolved Boosters. Ten Stone Commandments. Nine Holy Ghost Fruits. Eight Bridge Towards God. Seven Holy Godsends. Six Days Creating. Five Moses Books. Four Gospel Scribes. Three Blest Truth. Two Testaments. AND The Son of God, Jesus Christ. Amen. POST-POEM POINTS 12--(The Apostles Creed: 1. Believe in God The Father, Almighty, Maker of Heaven and Earth; 2. Believe in Jesus Christ, His only Begotten Son, Our Lord; 3. He was Conceived by The Holy Ghost, Born of The Virgin Mary; 4. Suffered under Pontius Pilate, Crucified, Died, and Buried thence Descended into Hell; 5. The Third Day He Rose from The Dead; 6. He Ascended into Heaven and Sits at The Right Hand of The Father Almighty God; 7. From thence He shall come to Judge The Quick and The Dead; 8. Belief in The Holy Ghost; 9. Believe in The Holy Church and The Communion of Saints; 10. The Forgiveness of Sins; 11. The Resurrection of The Body; 12. Promised Life Eternal) 11--(Eleven Devoted Disciples; Peter, James, John, Andrew, Bartholomew or Nathanael, James the Lesser or the Younger, Jude or Thaddeus, Matthew or Levi, Philip, Simon the Zealot, Thomas Didymus) 10--(The Ten Commandments; Exodus 20:2-17) 9--(The Nine Fruits of The Holy Spirit; Love, Joy, Peace, Patience, Kindness, Goodness, Faithfulness, Gentleness, and Self Control) 8--(The Beatitudes; Matthew 5:3–12) 7--(The Sevenfold Gifts of The Holy Spirit; Prophecy, Serving, Teaching, Exhortation, Contribution, Leadership, and Mercy) 6--(The Six Active Days of Forming; First Day: The Light; Second Day: The Sky; Third Day: The Ground, The Seas, The Plants, The Trees; Fourth Day: The Sun, The Moon, The Stars; Fifth Day: The Birds, The Sea Life; Day 6: The Land Animals, The Mortals) 5--(The Five First Books of The Bible - The Jewish Torah or The Christian Pentateuch; Genesis, Exodus, Leviticus, Numbers, and Deuteronomy) 4--(The Four Pillars of The Church; Matthew, Mark, Luke, and John) 3--(The Three Theological Virtues; Faith, Hope, and Charity) 2--(The Old [Jewish] and The New [Christian] Statements of Beliefs) 1--(The Begotten Son of God, Jesus Christ) Amen. 2022 November 25 *9th Place* MOST BEAUTIFUL CHRISTMAS POEM ~~Mystic Rose Rose: Judged 2022 November 27 *HMS; 1st 2 Listing

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Date: 12/7/2022 7:12:00 AM
Fabulous William. Creative and thoughtful form for theologic content. Congratulations on your win! Linda
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Hilo Poet
Date: 12/7/2022 8:04:00 AM
Thanks, Linda, for I am appreciative of your highlighted expressions and praise my friend, Mele Kalikimaka William
Date: 12/1/2022 3:39:00 AM
Congratulations, well put Biblical truths:)
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Hilo Poet
Date: 12/1/2022 6:53:00 AM
Thank you, Jo, for the blessing my friend, Aloha William
Date: 11/29/2022 10:22:00 AM
William, what a wonderful take on the contest theme, the beloved Christmas song, all wrapped up in the amazing theology of Christmas! Truly a gem. So happy to see it on the winners list! Mahalo, ka'u hoaaloha! Ke Akua Ho'omaika'i! (Hope I got that right!) I love that you teach me Hawaiian!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/29/2022 8:40:00 PM
In my prayers William! Keep us posted!
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Hilo Poet
Date: 11/29/2022 12:07:00 PM
('Ae, e ku'u hoaaloha, ua pololei 'oe!) Grateful for your good-natured acknowledgments as always, Sam, while my island is shaking and baking for the past two days--three fingers of lava and more than a hundred tremors daily now--but just hangin' loose my friend, Aloha William
Date: 11/28/2022 5:24:00 AM
Congratulations for your win :)
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Hilo Poet
Date: 11/28/2022 11:38:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi, Aloha William

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