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Mosquito Sneeze

Mosquito Sneeze I was just about to sneeze, When I felt a mosquito Squat firmly upon my nose And watched it "bite me"! "Ah-Choo!" And up it arose In search of another drink, Gliding gently where he thinks-- On ^Rick's head--drilling! ~deborah burch 4/09/2011

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 4/16/2012 10:32:00 PM

Congrats Deb on your hilarious biting win! So cute!! Blessings, Rhonda

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/16/2012 11:58:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Linda-Marie's "Bite Me" contest Deborah. Love, Carol

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 4/15/2012 12:23:00 AM

Awesome piece,Deb.I love the way you sneezed to scare off the mosquito.....Congratulations on your win...Love O.A

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/14/2012 9:26:00 PM

Poor Rick! Another fun buggy poem...I don't usually get to read and comment on all the winners but I was able to this evening...A special congrats to you Deborah...quick, get Rick a cool compress! ha ha. Gwendolen

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/14/2012 9:01:00 PM

Mosquitos are the worst. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2012 8:53:00 PM

That's funny. On rick's head!!! Big congrats.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/14/2012 7:37:00 PM

congrats Deborah on sweet success for this super entry luv..

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/14/2012 8:04:00 PM

Thank you so much Linda for my place and for a cool and fun contest!!! big hugs,love deb

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/11/2012 12:41:00 PM

What a mosquito!! Heehee, I could just imagine this unfolding though :D Enjoyed this one :D Thanks btw, I'm happy you enjoyed my write :D

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/14/2012 8:04:00 PM

lol...thank you Nikko! :D big huggs,love deb

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/9/2012 3:26:00 PM

This is a fabulously incredible write my friend! What a spectacular poem judging by these two awesome lines, "Squat firmly upon my nose, And watched it "bite me"!" just a terrible place to get bitten! I really enjoyed your poem that I have read this afternoon! Terrific write! I love your poem that you have written Debbie! Great Work!!

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/9/2012 3:44:00 PM

Ahhh, thank you dear Russell!! lol it was a fun little write...your encouragement is always so dear to me, thank you...and congrats on all your success lately...woo hoo...well done...big huggsss,love debs