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Mosquito Bite Dream

Dream in deep sleeping danger tiger attacking combating with strength mosquito piercing sucking liquid sepia no way to be safe sudden slapped on cheek under palm small tiger killed sweats of fear rouses

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Robin Davis

Date: 11/6/2013 5:06:00 PM

Bl this is a creative and unique write. Full of imagination. Nice job thanks for the nice and sweet comment on my Thank You poem. Hugs

Bl Devnath
Date: 11/7/2013 12:16:00 AM

Thanks my friend for your comment on my write. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/16/2013 6:35:00 PM

I liked how you had the tiger be the mosquito, and you killed it in your dream. Verrrrry interesting.

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/17/2013 7:58:00 AM

Hi! my friend, in dream I have realized such things many times in my life. Thanks a lot for your sweet comment. Loved always, bl

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 9/16/2013 2:09:00 PM

hi BL a lovely haiku much enjoyed Shadow x smile

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/17/2013 7:55:00 AM

Thanks a lot for your comment. Loved always, bl