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Mosquito Bite

I took an oath from thy God’s face That life dwelling on earth I raise Cuddle what breathes in this thick case But you that slurp my red Deserve no love nor an embrace Slap! You die yet I bled. © Glenn L. Sentes July 4, 2011

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Arnold Mutugi

Date: 7/13/2011 5:55:00 AM

You should pay a visit to Africa. I will show you mosquitoes that bite without hurting. They are very skilful because you cannot slap them successfully. Nice poem

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/10/2011 5:45:00 PM

I love it....I wrote a poem on mosquitoes once....it is on the soup.

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 7/9/2011 12:26:00 PM

SPLATT! :)

Tasha Wright

Date: 7/5/2011 11:52:00 PM

Thanks for your comment :) I like this. Short but really to the point. Love it!

Don Johnson

Date: 7/4/2011 3:44:00 PM

gotta watch dem mossie buggers , slap em down slap to lugger,(ear) great verse mate, Don

Jancarl Campi

Date: 7/4/2011 2:54:00 PM

Hmm an interesting poem. Good luck in the contest. Jancarl

Judy Ball

Date: 7/4/2011 10:25:00 AM

Oh I do so agree my friend. I bled and so she dies. Good job here God Bless, JB

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/4/2011 9:14:00 AM

nice to meet you, glenn... a powerful write! greeat stuff... ; ) hugggs,nette

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 7/4/2011 9:09:00 AM

well done, Glen and those buggers make you suffer even after they die! good write . Good luck in the contest.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/4/2011 8:30:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Glenn. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Glenn Sentes
Date: 7/4/2011 8:48:00 AM

Thanks to you, Ms. Carol! I regret that I only got to learn about PS last night! Stumbling upon you guys is a blessing! I love PS! God bless us all!