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Mosquito Bite

I took an oath from thy God’s face
That life dwelling on earth I raise
Cuddle what breathes in this thick case
But you that slurp my red
Deserve no love nor an embrace
Slap! You die yet I bled.

© Glenn L. Sentes
July 4, 2011

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  1. Date: 7/13/2011 5:55:00 AM
    You should pay a visit to Africa. I will show you mosquitoes that bite without hurting. They are very skilful because you cannot slap them successfully. Nice poem

  1. Date: 7/10/2011 5:45:00 PM
    I love it....I wrote a poem on mosquitoes is on the soup.

  1. Date: 7/9/2011 12:26:00 PM
    SPLATT! :)

  1. Date: 7/5/2011 11:52:00 PM
    Thanks for your comment :) I like this. Short but really to the point. Love it!

  1. Date: 7/4/2011 3:44:00 PM
    gotta watch dem mossie buggers , slap em down slap to lugger,(ear) great verse mate, Don

  1. Date: 7/4/2011 2:54:00 PM
    Hmm an interesting poem. Good luck in the contest. Jancarl

  1. Date: 7/4/2011 10:25:00 AM
    Oh I do so agree my friend. I bled and so she dies. Good job here God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 7/4/2011 9:14:00 AM
    nice to meet you, glenn... a powerful write! greeat stuff... ; ) hugggs,nette

  1. Date: 7/4/2011 9:09:00 AM
    well done, Glen and those buggers make you suffer even after they die! good write . Good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 7/4/2011 8:30:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Glenn. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

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    Date: 7/4/2011 8:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks to you, Ms. Carol! I regret that I only got to learn about PS last night! Stumbling upon you guys is a blessing! I love PS! God bless us all!