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Mortality

inside mortal tears losing all that we hold dear finding naught but fear inside mortal souls full of hate, and full of holes die from mortal tolls inside mortal hate anger never does abate leaving us to fate human destiny that we always cannot see never sets us free enslaved by our mind we can never seem to find eternal chains bind we have lost ourselves our eternal spirit delves we have lost ourselves we see only fear grasping all that we hold dear slowly, shed a tear lost within, we scream without. screaming without, we lose ourselves

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/8/2010 3:12:00 AM
Congrats Syd on your very thought-provoking haiku series! --nikko :)
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Date: 10/5/2010 8:20:00 PM
Congratulations, Syd!
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Date: 10/5/2010 2:53:00 PM
Congrats Syd on your super win in the Haiku contest with these expressive Haikus.. enjoy your win tonight with luv..
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:39:00 PM
Syd, Congratulations and thanks for supporting my contest. I had lots of fun running this contest,.p.d.
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:37:00 PM
fabulous entry, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:15:00 PM
Congratulations Syd on your win in P.D.'s contest *Going Haiku Crazy*. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:14:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Syd
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Date: 9/9/2010 3:16:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your impressive poetry today Syd. Have not read for almost a week now. I had a wonderful vacation. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/9/2010 7:11:00 AM
nice and strong write, enjoyed this one..P.D.
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Date: 9/9/2010 7:07:00 AM
Nice thought well expressed on mortality, Syd
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Date: 9/9/2010 6:43:00 AM
to me this was a very deep poem i like the words you have used i like the setting it put on for me and the feelings it left in me after i was done but good job keep writtin
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