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Mortal Love

you did something. something that hurt my very heart. will i ever forgive you for what you have done to me? you made me look like a fool. a fool that was sprung over your very being. will i ever forgive myself for not forgiving you? well there is no need to because my love for you is worn out. you see my love was immortal to anything that tried to kill it. but when you did what you did, you took its immortality. then my love became mortal. and everytime i thought of what you did, when you went behind my back, disrespecting me and my morals, and made out with my best friend, my love for you lessened until i didn't love you at all. my immortal love became and will stay my mortal love because of you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/8/2009 8:44:00 PM
I love this poem. Great job! Welcome to the soup...Sabrina
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Date: 8/7/2009 3:24:00 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Hosea. I am wishing you the very best in your writing. Love, Carol
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