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Morphosis

No, no, no something wasn't right isn't right never right Morphed again drinking coke, smoking. searching - pushing not right Circles, more circles red, black, yellow circles around my brain, BIG aarrggghh that's better something is right Light, there must be light shade, paint, more more it's not right, never right Darkness not perfect for godsake nothings perfect don't seek don't I don't like the circles paint em more paint arrrgghhh that's better feeling better now. Morphed again.

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Date: 8/3/2011 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Robt. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Robert Mccall
Date: 8/3/2011 10:41:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 5/16/2011 5:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Robert
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Date: 5/16/2011 1:06:00 PM
Congratulations Robert on your featured write this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/5/2011 4:43:00 PM
really good, love your style!
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Robert Mccall
Date: 8/3/2011 10:42:00 AM
Thank you - kind of you to say so.
Date: 4/4/2011 4:56:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Robert. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors what ever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/2/2011 8:29:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight with it;s interesting theme... hope your time on P.S. will be fun and filled with sharing with luv.. our contests are free to enter ..so please check them out and good luck luv..
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