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Morningstar Visions (Part 8)

Folded waterfalls Blue-vertexed sound waves flow Dead spheres glowing roads

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/30/2009 11:42:00 PM
Like this sequence haku Cesar.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.
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Date: 5/27/2009 11:49:00 PM
very full of rich images, written very well,,,blessings..Cecil
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Date: 5/25/2009 2:45:00 PM
this is wonderful,im glad my fingertips led me here--charma
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Date: 5/25/2009 5:24:00 AM
Wow...the second line is awesome..wow..very good haiku.
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