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Morningstar Visions (Part 2)

Cloudy particles Build up greenish, sunny rose Soup-consuming void

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/29/2009 7:42:00 AM
Your eyes are like that of a chemist in a futuristic lab ... I mean you are exploding conventions in the creation of the new.
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Date: 5/17/2009 11:03:00 PM
Nice work, love the opening line. I'm sponsoring a haiku contest, if you'd like to enter...Raul
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Date: 5/17/2009 3:45:00 PM
This is a winner my friend...lines two and three are amazing.
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Date: 5/17/2009 11:17:00 AM
Aha! This is truly amazing Cesar keep on writting my friend for your pen has a heart of its own! - jeremias
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