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Morning's Fresh Breath

Early bright lithe and lively morning fresh breath, Swish through and with a courtly, pirouette. Breezing trees hear the whispers of their own leaves. The rain's philter makes the earth surface dance. Near the river's edge ducklings splash in play; Swirls break the echo moving surface song. The day rolls up exhausted, nightfall slowly creeps And nuzzles into the horizon once again. 3/27/2022

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Date: 3/30/2022 12:47:00 AM
Beautiful picture painted. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/28/2022 12:06:00 PM
And all without the Roper throwing a single loop . . . .Enjoyed! Aloha!
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Date: 3/28/2022 10:23:00 AM
Your imagery is fantastically and carefully done Eve. Wow!
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Date: 3/28/2022 1:00:00 AM
You begin your morning with a lively description. Great imagery. Hugs.
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Date: 3/27/2022 4:29:00 PM
Very pretty. I love the imagery, you've penned a lovely picture of a beautiful day. :)Paulette
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/27/2022 8:27:00 PM
thank you so much, Paulette, always enjoy the inspiration. Blessing's friend

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