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Morning's Caress

Wading through the clouds and waking sun An early moon unaware her time is done Smiles lazily on icy stream and lawn With fields brightening Winter aplomb. In tandem with sets of twinkling stars Along the first bright rays of golden bars There is a peaceful calm and all is still As daybreak bends for new sunbeam's refill. While landscape sketches frosty morning air I see how dawn has braided flowers in her hair Adorning boughs with scented loveliness So right and wholesome, my heart feels her caress! PD Linda: Submit A Smile from Carly Lalion

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Date: 1/27/2014 2:31:00 PM
LOVELY! I especially enjoyed the flow of this piece. My favourite line is dawn has braided flowers in her hair... nice imagery. Nice today. It's snow-ville here, and horrid. Even the school buses were cancelled, due to the bad weather. This made me warm :D not easy to do today. Cheers, Cyndi
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Date: 1/7/2014 7:56:00 AM
- Another beautifully winning poem, Carly ! - Congratulations !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/29/2013 4:27:00 AM
Enjoyed your poem and congratulations on the fine win,Carly
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Date: 12/28/2013 9:19:00 PM
Carly, :) , CONGRATULATIONS, thank you for supporting my SMILE contest. :) Wishing you a Warm And Heartfelt New Year. Take care.... LINDA
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Date: 12/27/2013 1:51:00 PM
Carly, taking a little peek... Wishing all is well with you. Can't wait to put this contest out Today... Cheers... Linda
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Date: 12/21/2013 7:47:00 AM
I see how dawn has braided flowers in her hair..howlovely!!!!!! You will do well in lLinda's contest!
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