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Morning Sunrise

sunrise rushes eyes
taut from night of sleepy dreams…
clumsy fingers pry

hard floor limbers feet
stiff from immobility…
quick run to bathroom

java perks real strong 
black as the ebony night…
cold bran cereal

movement is real slow
old feet and knees start to ache…
tenacious treadmill

eyelids wide open
embracing daily house chores…

Copyright © 2011 By Caryl S. Muzzey
August 24, 2011

Eighth Place Winner ~ "Morning, noon, or night senryus” Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: France Roberts
Sept. 20, 2011

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  1. Date: 8/31/2011 10:13:00 PM
    Very nice Senryus here Caryl.Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 8/30/2011 10:11:00 PM
    Congrats Caryl on an exciting win with this fascinating poetry so lovely the words my friend.. enjoy ...

  1. Date: 8/30/2011 6:29:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 8/30/2011 7:35:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved winning piece Caryl. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/30/2011 3:16:00 AM
    hey caryl congrats on your win , David

  1. Date: 8/29/2011 11:33:00 PM
    congrats Caryl on your 8th place win in the contest

  1. Date: 8/25/2011 9:36:00 AM
    Lift your pen and let your creative words flow onto the paper Caryl. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/25/2011 5:30:00 AM
    All the best to you in the contest with this fine write.

  1. Date: 8/24/2011 4:34:00 PM
    Reads like a very good morning that is filled with good things to get you awake and going..Reads like winning material to me..Good luck in the contest..Sara

  1. Date: 8/24/2011 3:51:00 PM
    good luck for this exquisite write...really deserving for an applause~~~smile~~~~*_* junjun