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Morning Sessions

Green moss moist on trees, Vines glisten with character; Canopy in mist.

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Tyler Martin

Date: 4/27/2009 10:18:00 PM

Never thought of it as sessions but great work and peacful as usual. Tyler

Emily Kroeger

Date: 4/24/2009 8:33:00 AM

hmm ...

L'Nass Shango

Date: 4/22/2009 7:04:00 AM

Wow ... brother, don't lie ... you just returned from a Japanes sabbathical ... awesome line. man.

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/22/2009 6:26:00 AM

It is very foggy here this morning and I feel like you just looked out my window. Another excellent haiku. Love, Shar

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/21/2009 5:04:00 PM

Lovely look at the forest. I love the last line. BG

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/21/2009 4:09:00 PM

A beautiful image on your canvas here, Raul. Bravo! Love, Carolyn

James Marshall Goff

Date: 4/21/2009 1:50:00 PM

Raul, you captured this forest/jungle moment perfectly! Jim

John Weber

Date: 4/21/2009 11:41:00 AM

Smooth, flowing script here, Raul, as cool as that moss. Warm regards, John.

Robin Maughan

Date: 4/21/2009 11:40:00 AM

I love Haiku..and i love this!! Well done...moss is everywhere in South Carolina where I live,,, hugs and Peace, Robin

Frank F. Atanacio

Date: 4/21/2009 10:40:00 AM

You just paint perfectly Raul

Tyler Davis

Date: 4/21/2009 10:16:00 AM

Nice title, never thought of it as sessions. Nice work.

S. Michael Fuller

Date: 4/21/2009 10:04:00 AM

This immediately took me to Turner Falls, and a beautiful day spent there almost 30 years ago. Thank you helping me find that memory amidst all the clutter in my attic. Your words are beautiful as is the picture they paint.