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Morning Rush

Morning Shift! I hear my heart beats thump!thump!thump! like running under the sun's heats. I feel my sweat carress my cheeks down, down, through my sleeves Morning Rush! 12/10/21

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Toquyen Harrell

Date: 11/7/2012 6:20:00 AM

We are always rushing in the morning, aren't we? Good write, Charmane. One can see the urgency in your write. Love ya, Toquyen

Toquyen Harrell
Date: 11/7/2012 6:22:00 AM

Read it the second time. Love it. Love ya, Toquyen

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 11/1/2012 11:15:00 AM

We are in such a hurry, aren't we? Charming, Charmane. Love ya, Toquyen

Charmane Bellen
Date: 11/7/2012 2:02:00 AM

yeah such a hurry!specially going to work in a 6am shift..makes my nerves goes up!..by the way thanks for reading..hope you'll like my poems..always>>charmane