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Lightly caressing her soft petals he melts her tender heart… she blooms. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Contest: Form - C Sponsor: Broken Wings © 6th January 2017 Cinqku follows a strict 17 syllable count arranged in five successive lines of 2-3-4-6-2 syllables.

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Susan Ashley

Date: 1/15/2018 9:54:00 PM

The imagery this poem creates in my being is breathtaking Paul. Absolutely gorgeous and lushly sensuous, romantic and loving.. just artistically and poetically beautiful.. Warmest wishes my friend ~Susan

Paul Callus
Date: 1/16/2018 12:15:00 PM

It's a pleasure reading your lovely comments, Susan; you're always on the right wavelength!! Thank you! ~ Warm regards // paul

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 2/6/2017 9:00:00 AM

My friend, Paul, this is soooo incredibly lovely! A beautiful morning rose you have painted with your amazing brush! Love it and a 7 for this excellent Cinqku! Best regards. Pandita

Paul Callus
Date: 2/6/2017 9:32:00 AM

Many thanks, Pandita...I love your lovely feedback and high rating! Keeping your mum in my thoughts. Warm regards // paul

Arlene Smith

Date: 1/17/2017 3:20:00 PM

Forever the romantic.. Stunning, my friend..

Paul Callus
Date: 1/19/2017 4:36:00 PM

Thank you for the lovely remarks, Arlene:) Best regards // paul

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 1/16/2017 11:17:00 AM

The write is as beautiful as the picture.

Paul Callus
Date: 1/19/2017 11:14:00 AM

Thank you Armand. All the best to you. // paul

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 1/14/2017 3:37:00 PM

Very romantic, Paul. I love those kind of poems. Excellent cinqku. Love and joy to you always

Paul Callus
Date: 1/14/2017 4:34:00 PM

Thank you for being supportive and encouraging, Freddie! Best regards to you...paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 1/12/2017 11:31:00 AM

I love the twist you do in your poem Paul.. :) I love butterflies Paul and again I tested my pen on it :) Threading the writing again :) thank you for welcoming me back.. hugs and smiles- Olive ELoisa :)

Paul Callus
Date: 1/13/2017 5:15:00 PM

It is a pleasure to have you back, dipping pens with us, Olive_eloi:) At this time of the year, in the Soup kitchen it might be warmer than in Inverness:):) Hugs ~ paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/12/2017 11:26:00 AM

- Sweet and lovely, Paul - A beautiful rose :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus
Date: 1/13/2017 5:11:00 PM

A rose like that cannot but be special, Anne-Lise:) Thank you for reading and liking. Hugs // paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/9/2017 1:19:00 PM

Reads like a winner..Way to go for the contest..I enjoyed reading the passionate work..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara

Paul Callus
Date: 1/9/2017 3:06:00 PM

Thank you, Sara. So glad that you enjoyed. Best regards // paul

Charlie Smith

Date: 1/7/2017 2:03:00 PM

Lovely Paul, best wishes...

Paul Callus
Date: 1/7/2017 2:40:00 PM

Thank you, Charlie. Best wishes for the new year! // paul

Phil Capitano

Date: 1/7/2017 10:19:00 AM

Stunning image Paul, good luck in the contest.

Paul Callus
Date: 1/7/2017 2:54:00 PM

Thank you, Phil. Pleased to make your acquaintance. // paul

Vera Duggan

Date: 1/6/2017 11:30:00 PM

Oh! Paul this is so beautiful and tender, love is like a rose, good luck in the contest and take care........Vera

Paul Callus
Date: 1/7/2017 8:04:00 AM

I am pleased you like it, Vera. Thank you for stopping by:) Regards // paul

Deborah Burch

Date: 1/6/2017 9:23:00 PM

WOW!! Such a wonderfully concise poem!!! Has it all... big hugs!! Deb

Paul Callus
Date: 1/7/2017 7:54:00 AM

Thank you, Deborah! I love your encouraging remarks:) Hugs // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 1/6/2017 4:52:00 PM

You've left me breathless with your lines Paul - absolutely beautiful!:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 1/7/2017 7:44:00 AM

Wow, naughty me...I should have provided inhalers, seeing that the audience are having breathing problems:):) Thank you for reading and enjoying. Hugs // paul