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Morning Rituals

Waiting anxiously, Old Red hovers by the door… Mother Nature calls The dew on the grass is soaking my slippered feet… I drink in the news Rising from my cup, white steam fogs up my glasses…. Sun breaks through the dawn A neighbor jogging, waves with enthusiasm…. I step on the scales A song from upstairs, off key, yet operatic…. I can hear his mood Wafting up the stairs, I send some encouragement…. Crisp bacon sizzles ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: In Honor of Francine's Contest: "Morning, Noon, or Night Senryus" By Carrie Richards 8/21/11

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Date: 8/31/2011 10:12:00 PM
Carrie accept my late congratulations on your win in Francine's contest.beautiful Senryus.
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Date: 8/30/2011 10:08:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on a lovely win with this exciting poetry .. filled with lovely words for the contest entry luv..
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Date: 8/30/2011 6:26:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your winning work..Sara
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Date: 8/30/2011 7:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved winning piece Carrie. A beautiful picture you painted here with your words. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/30/2011 3:14:00 AM
hey Carrie congrats on another great win, David
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Date: 8/29/2011 11:31:00 PM
congrats on your 7th place win Carrie, love the last stanza, great job
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Date: 8/25/2011 1:37:00 AM
You must be a morning person? Though I can't relate very well, I really enjoyed it. VERy creative and very well written.
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Date: 8/23/2011 8:16:00 PM
Last two stanzas are really sweet.:)
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Date: 8/23/2011 8:14:00 PM
Lovely Senryus here Carie..liked very much.Best wishes in the contest.
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