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Morning In the Cape

Early morning The mist is still asleep on the lonely well polished grass The birds are crying I'm stuck with this load on my back Morning in the Cape Busy life, people having fun The pavement is my bed The insects are my friends Welcome to my world

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/7/2013 10:21:00 AM

A great Free -for-all winning poem. *CONGRATULATIONS!!! With your awesome winning write. have a great day, TA TA TA * Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2013 9:28:00 AM

Cool poem and big congrats to you on the winners list.

Skat A

Date: 7/3/2013 11:54:00 PM

very nice........... skat

Karen Anglesey

Date: 7/3/2013 7:27:00 PM

Very well composed and great contrast. Stunning imagery. Congrats on your win :)

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 7/3/2013 6:38:00 PM

Congrtulations on your fantastic win. Very deep and kind of sad. Nicely done. Warm Smiles, Connie

Seosamh De Burca

Date: 5/13/2013 12:10:00 PM

You capture light and dark in your poem very well. I enjoyed reading your poem and felt the sadness also. Well done