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Morning Has Spoken

Most beautiful honey deep inside the pot sweetly stirring thoughts feelings velvet satin fluttering soft touching sweetly emotions smile Breathing in the fresh morning air misty capped mountains speak echoing winds carries deep inside a faraway treasure brushing across each warm skipping beat falling dew upon the ground thinking of you as an amazing dream Spirit of your beauty flies with me dancing warm waves upon this soul within the loving you Paradise on distant sands golden in a faraway land across many distant seas I lay my heart upon the sands just for you my love Good morning most beautiful is when you smile

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/7/2014 6:18:00 PM
Liam . . . Me Old Leprechaun Mate!! Full of passion and a most pronounced spirit. A romantically moving piece indeed. Most Excellent!! The Leprechauns will sing in unison on this one. Cheers and Spill Ink!! Gary
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/7/2014 6:32:00 PM
the leprechauns are out with their magic tin whistles playing a tune wonderful comment gary heart touching beautiful dear pal smiling bless you buddy
Date: 11/7/2014 1:40:00 PM
This is a beautiful and romantic morning hymn, Liam....the imagery captivating...the ending excellent! // paul
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/7/2014 3:40:00 PM
thank you deeply paul for the dazzling very beautiful comment smiling bless you pal
Date: 11/6/2014 8:25:00 PM
Liam ,The Dawn Of Your Morning , Has Spoken To Me, As Now The Full Moon Rises,Over The Rocky Mountains... Very Heart Felt, Thank You For Sharing!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/7/2014 3:32:00 PM
as i write the moon is in full face wonderful comment dear friend bless you
Date: 11/6/2014 5:28:00 PM
Amazing Liam, so sweet is your morning, you light up your darkness by dreaming and sharing with all of us, what you feel. Terry xoox
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/7/2014 3:18:00 PM
so sweet of you terry yeah out of the darkness awakening to rising glowing sunshine thank you kindly bless you pal
Date: 11/6/2014 4:52:00 AM
Very nice Liam. Do you have that special person? they are very lucky
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/7/2014 3:11:00 PM
thank you jasmine alone i dream of her wonderful comment dear pal bless you
Date: 11/6/2014 3:24:00 AM
Passionate write dear friend love it hugs
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/7/2014 2:35:00 PM
smiling linda dear pal wonderful comment bless you
Date: 11/6/2014 2:17:00 AM
so romantic with wonderful sweet imagery - the final stanza is simply stnning:-) hugs jan xx
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/6/2014 6:15:00 PM
so very sweet of you jan truly wonderful comment thank you kindly dear pal deeply appreciated
Date: 11/5/2014 11:18:00 PM
Awesome! Very romantic and beautifully penned, Liam. I Enjoyed your poem my very dear friend.My very favorite stanza is the last one. So full of love and devotion. God bless! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/6/2014 9:50:00 AM
this really got me deeply smiling wonderful comment dorian really shows i am devoted to the one i love bless you dear friend and thank you kindly
Date: 11/5/2014 10:32:00 PM
Great ending -- the smile opening the day to endless opportunity -- nicely done.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/6/2014 11:14:00 AM
david that is so true it goes a long way to brightening up the day as well set the tone for the day wonderful comment bless you

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