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Morning Has Broken

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Dawn cracked this morning spilling sunlight's golden yolk across mountain peaks spreading his whispered greetings as if they were words of warmth

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/24/2024 5:17:00 PM

I never thought of a sunrise using this metaphor. Thanks for allowing me to share in this expression. It's an insight that I can call upon often.

Lin Lane
Date: 2/24/2024 6:29:00 PM

I'm delighted you saw the metaphor, Duke. Thank you for your kind thoughts.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/23/2024 9:37:00 AM

What an exceptional tanka and i adore the picture - is it another masterpeice from you brush Lin - it is exquisite:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 2/23/2024 6:51:00 PM

No masterpiece but it’s mine. Thank you, Jan.

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 2/20/2024 3:50:00 PM

Beautiful smooth read!

Lin Lane
Date: 2/20/2024 5:06:00 PM

Thank you very kindly, ~AA.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/20/2024 2:54:00 PM

your a true poet girl, one of the best !

Lin Lane
Date: 2/20/2024 5:05:00 PM

You made me smile, Vie. That's the best kind of compliment a poet could ever want to receive. Thanks!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/20/2024 8:38:00 AM

an exquisite Tanka, dear Lin. I loved these words: spreading his whispered greetings. That's what I felt and experienced while walking just after dawn this morning. Just beautiful words. Faving. Hugs, Sara

Lin Lane
Date: 2/20/2024 9:59:00 AM

Merci, merci bon Ami. I love everything about early mornings. I appreciate the fave as well as your supportive comments.

Mark Koplin

Date: 2/20/2024 7:52:00 AM

Good poem and painting, my friend.

Lin Lane
Date: 2/20/2024 9:58:00 AM

Thanks, on both counts, Mark.

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 2/19/2024 7:25:00 PM

A marvelous Tanka, Lin. Beautiful imagery of a sunrise across the mountain peaks.

Lin Lane
Date: 2/19/2024 8:08:00 PM

Thank you. Jerry. I wanted to write something to go with my latest painting. It’s not a complicated work of art but I was happy with it.

Bill Baker

Date: 2/19/2024 6:47:00 PM

A FAV for my list, Lin. I've missed reading your poetry, my friend. Nice painting and lovely uplifting imagery in this one. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Lin Lane
Date: 2/19/2024 6:56:00 PM

Hi Bill and thank you. I had a couple of days where I just didn't feel like writing. Thanks for noticing I'd been mia. I don't know what I'm happier seeing... your kind comments or the new photo of you and your sweet missus. Hugs to you both.