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Morning Cues

A dapper morning awaits as I gaze out to an awakening steeped in conviviality so palpable in glow of leaves bathed anew radiant in glory Glistening crisp blades of grass razor edged sharp deftly cut through weeds of gloom Aromas soaked in mirth envelope landscape From my soul infused with joy escapes a sigh embraced avidly by bountiful breeze the lines between us blur slowly as it subsumes me And I cease to be my spirit merged with universe... Date July 10 2017 July Premier contest any form any theme sponsored by Brian Strand

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Frank Sheehan

Date: 10/25/2017 12:56:00 PM

Fantastic poem. Wonderful imagery. It has great rhythm and flow. Enjoyed it immensely.

Sushma A. Singh
Date: 3/4/2018 3:08:00 AM

Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/14/2017 3:53:00 AM

- A wonderful poem, Sushma :) - I see it is a winning poem ... CONGRATULATIONS, well deserved ! - happy hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sushma A. Singh
Date: 8/14/2017 4:22:00 AM

Thanks a lot for your warm appreciation!

Ralph Sergi

Date: 8/10/2017 4:24:00 PM

Hi Sushma: I was overwhelmed by some of your overwhelming imagery and words. Brian should be ashamed if he doesn't give you a placement. Great Write!

Sushma A. Singh
Date: 8/10/2017 9:05:00 PM

Thank you! This poem was placed second in the contest.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 7/21/2017 1:55:00 AM

Congratulation. Aromas linger in the poem although these are washed away by the monsoon rains.

Sushma A. Singh
Date: 8/10/2017 9:05:00 PM

Thanks!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/17/2017 4:08:00 PM

this is filled with beautiful and imaginative images, Sushma. I hope brian loves it!

Sushma A. Singh
Date: 7/18/2017 6:52:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea!

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 7/13/2017 7:51:00 PM

This is wonderful, Sushma ... whimsical and woven with imagination and creativity. Fav-ing this one ... congrats on the win!

Sushma A. Singh
Date: 7/13/2017 8:20:00 PM

Thank you and Congrats to you too!

Agnes Krampe

Date: 7/13/2017 7:41:00 AM

You paint a beautiful image; it was a pleasure to read your poem this morning. Congrats on your win.

Sushma A. Singh
Date: 7/13/2017 7:57:00 AM

Thank you Agnes! We have very few such mornings here but luckily past few days it has been drizzling incessantly so it is great weather. Otherwise North Indian plains are more like your July poem during summer months :) Congrats to you too!