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Morning Crush

Awaken to the early morning sun
 dew gently clings to the grass
The freshness of crisp morning air
Feels breath-taking and pure

The birds awaken before sunrise
 a variety of melodies float
upon the mornings cool air
Harmony exists in song

I yawn....

Get up , get ready to start the day
No signs of laziness do I display
Up and at it is a motto I keep
But man I need another hour of sleep

I yawn.....
The birds sang this lullaby
My eyes closed I gave a sigh
Next it was high noon
Guess I will get up for this afternoon.

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  1. Date: 7/6/2013 12:08:00 AM
    I love this,, ////i close my eyes and drift off myself at times. It feels so good to do that. How are you,,,, love Deb ;}

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 2:34:00 AM
    This sounds cute to me.Every Sunday z like dis 2 me. :-)

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 2:12:00 PM
    lol, I love a nice lie in too, Phyll. Hope you're feeling better now x

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 12:09:00 AM
    haha, this one has humor and wit. Good one, my friend.

  1. Date: 6/8/2013 7:14:00 AM
    Hi Phyllis, I like the use of alliteration in your poem.(the repeated use of I Yawn) is very nice. Well when you wake up...try getting up next thing you know sleep could drag you into the next day.

  1. Date: 6/7/2013 1:48:00 AM
    - Phyllis, thanks for a delicious morning! - Love it! - Have a lovely weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 8:57:00 PM
    Very nice write. Enjoyed the read.