Get Your Premium Membership

Morning Breeze

changing patterns of dappled sunlight--- morning breeze

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/8/2012 2:34:00 PM
And this must have been one of your first awesome haiku that I faved!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/8/2012 2:34:00 PM
hmmm, it was from 2012. I thought earlier!!
Login to Reply
Date: 5/6/2012 12:12:00 PM
enjoyed your haiku Kash, you sure have this form down to a tee.. I was just wondering whether that witty write of yours has placed, I hope it does ;)
Login to Reply
Date: 5/2/2012 6:48:00 AM
Haiku's seem mysterious to me... concise & beautiful (if done well)... beyond me... But I love yours... Terry
Login to Reply
Date: 5/1/2012 1:01:00 PM
Beautiful morning haiku.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/1/2012 9:43:00 AM
A cool haiku for the morning, nice, jag
Login to Reply
Date: 5/1/2012 2:27:00 AM
Very nice dear poet.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/1/2012 12:26:00 AM
Lovely I some how thought you might be an early morning person. It is one of my favorite times of the day. Like the ocean on a windy day may happiness come to you in continues waves. TLee
Login to Reply
Date: 4/30/2012 4:23:00 AM
oooh, you hypnotize me, kashi budddy.. am BACK after another allergy attack.. heat wave here in a way, arrgh!..:) huggs!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/28/2012 10:37:00 PM
Hey Kash...another s-m-o-o-t-h haiku....charming...! Gwendolen
Login to Reply
Date: 4/28/2012 4:18:00 PM
a beautiful picture with sensation. Really great. Huggs TLee
Login to Reply
Date: 4/28/2012 3:19:00 PM
Yes, both dawn and twilight seem to make the shapes of things change. Excellent description, my friend. Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 4/28/2012 12:33:00 AM
hey, Kash, I managed to spend an hour or more here. Maybe not tomorrow though. Hope to see a new one from you by Monday!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/27/2012 5:53:00 PM
Yes the light dances and wind stirs and creates different shapes, very nice Kash : ) love and blessings,
Login to Reply
Date: 4/27/2012 2:49:00 PM
a real beauty here, kash. many congrats on your wins too, my friend
Login to Reply
Date: 4/27/2012 1:32:00 PM
hey Kash you coming to the circus in my new contest? have a good weekend..David
Login to Reply
Date: 4/27/2012 10:35:00 AM
hey love this Kash, dappled just love that word. harry
Login to Reply
Date: 4/27/2012 6:49:00 AM
Great haiku, Kash. Enjoyed. Nice going. Ralph
Login to Reply
Date: 4/27/2012 4:13:00 AM
Very refreshing Haiku. Best wishes..Ravindra
Login to Reply
Date: 4/26/2012 3:14:00 PM
wow, this is AWESOME, Kash. one of your best haiku yet!!! fave!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/26/2012 12:39:00 PM
Kash I can feel it wafting over me now, cool words my friend..David
Login to Reply
Date: 4/26/2012 12:31:00 PM
Beautiful words kash, always well done haiku. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs