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Morning Breeze

Morning Breeze By: Noel N. Villarosa Morning breeze so cold Invites lovers to be closed Warm bodies and talk

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/19/2010 7:03:00 PM

Looking for your haiku tonight. This is a delight! A great excuse for cuddling is a cold day!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/22/2010 9:34:00 AM

Hi Noel :) This is such a nice haiku, and despite the "morning breeze" being "cold" leaves the readers with a warm heart--love can do that ;) thanks for sharing :)

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/20/2010 4:11:00 AM

Reading your poetry this morning, Noel, has been a wonderful way to start my day. This haiku is delightful...loving. Thank you for sharing. And thank you for your comments on my poetry as well. Have a super Day! Lovingly, Dane Ann

Eleanore Bourner

Date: 2/14/2010 8:51:00 AM

lovely poem Noel :) keep it up! ------Ell

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/14/2010 7:18:00 AM

A loving Haiku Noel and very imaginative and visual .. enjoyed this Morning Breeze for sure... thankxxx for your wonderful comments on my poetry ... so very appreciative .. happy Sunday and HVD to u..luv..Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 2/14/2010 6:45:00 AM

Dear Noel, A quick note before work this is Excellent in meter and message Bravo If YOU would like to read Great Haiku and Senryu read 'Raul Mo0reno's work or go to Memer Contest Winners and read His Winner's POEM in his Haiku and Senryu Contests See YOU this Evening YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG

Sheila Parrish-Spence

Date: 2/14/2010 6:21:00 AM

Good thoughts and imagery.

Susan Palli

Date: 2/14/2010 6:16:00 AM

Nice words