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Morning Bliss

Early morning mist, Beads down the blades of grass; Gleaming morning light.

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L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/26/2009 7:47:00 AM

One of the beautiful things of nature ... I see it has captured your heart too. Lovely

James Fraser

Date: 5/22/2009 1:17:00 PM

These words paint a lovely picture Raul, James

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 5/22/2009 12:49:00 PM

Wonderful description on the morning dew. great work. Love ELizabeth

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/22/2009 8:57:00 AM

It's wonderful how you allow us to see the world's beauty through your haikus, Raul. This is another gem! Love, Carolyn

Brian Strand

Date: 5/22/2009 8:28:00 AM

Beautiful imagery Raul.rgds Brian

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/22/2009 8:07:00 AM

Ummmm.....such a lovely sight...can hear the birds singing! Lovely!!

Lena Townsend

Date: 5/22/2009 7:35:00 AM

A beautiful and soft image. A wonderful start to my day, not the morning mist... poetry that touches the soul and speaks from the heart of one that can describe the pure essence of nature. Well done. Smiles from Lolita~ Soup Mail

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/22/2009 6:29:00 AM

And what a beautiful sight it is. Inspiring new day. Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/22/2009 4:06:00 AM

Raul, I really don't what else to say about these incredible haikus....this one is just clear to see....I am now calling you nature man because you are so intune with it..great writing..truly.

Diane Christian

Date: 5/22/2009 3:05:00 AM

aww sweet, a new day is dawning, we should rejoice and be glad A splendid write Raul God bless you from diane

Nathan Leccese

Date: 5/22/2009 3:01:00 AM

You just have to love the start of a new day and this Haiku captures the beauty of it all. Well done Raul. The Prince