Morning, Alive

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Morning bursts softly, gleams the ray Buds exploding…new sun's display As clouds peep Wheatgrass rustles across fields, lush Alive with canticles of a thrush For yield's heap And footsteps glide to meet each oak Dressed by resplendency, its cloak While hours leap. Charles Messina's Contest Triple Stanza Couplet Tail-Rhyme Poetry 6/10/2020

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/5/2020 3:49:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on your win Nette. Hope you are well. Much love :)

Eve Roper

Date: 7/2/2020 9:30:00 AM

Nette, a beautiful and very well deserving a 1st place win, congratulations on your win. I didn't know what he wanted so I guessed. Hugs Eve

Charles Messina

Date: 7/2/2020 5:30:00 AM

Nette, for some reason I can comment now (lol). Back with the congrats on your 1st place win! Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2020 7:18:00 PM

this is outstanding work, Nette. did this contest get judged? It is sure a winner for ME. Thanks for my win in your recent contest. Good to see your work more often now that you are back.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/11/2020 9:08:00 AM

This is incredible imagery Nette! Exploding buds and footsteps gliding to oak creates socha beautiful painting. Beat wishes for the contest. Love :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 6/11/2020 8:58:00 AM

What a lovely, gentle poem Nette. I really enjoyed being transcended by the imagery that you created! Happy Thursday xxoo