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Morning

Morning or mourning? One brings joy the other pain. Difference is you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Akkina Downing
Date: 5/16/2017 11:02:00 AM
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This is great and I love the ending :)
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Phil Capitano
Date: 5/17/2017 4:34:00 AM
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Thank you. This is another of my poems with multiple meanings (its my super power, lmao). I appreciate your comments. Namaste.
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John Michaels
Date: 4/8/2017 7:24:00 AM
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Very clever little Haiku. Am deeply impressed with your multiple meanings / play on words. Regards, John!
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Phil Capitano
Date: 4/8/2017 8:25:00 AM
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Thanks for the kind words and for visiting. Ciao.
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 3/20/2017 11:15:00 AM
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Hi Phil, i do love Haiku so i had to drop in on this one. Love the concept, well written Haiku Phil. I have to give it a seven and it goes into my Haiku faves. Your Friend....Mike.
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Phil Capitano
Date: 3/20/2017 12:36:00 PM
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Thanks Mike, of course, this has a triple meaning;(1) you make the difference in how the day is approached, (2) "u" is the difference between the two words and (3) "you" is the other person in your life that makes the difference. Glad you liked it.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/30/2017 7:45:00 AM
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Great haiku with deep meaning! Well done, Phil! Best regards. Pandita
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James Horn
Date: 1/13/2017 7:46:00 AM
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Night is now over; A morning is adorning, And great things it brings. Does a Capitano live in Capistrano?
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Phil Capitano
Date: 1/13/2017 8:10:00 AM
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You are the haiku master James and no I live in an igloo, lol. (not really) we just call it Canada.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/12/2017 9:23:00 AM
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It is all in how you approach it. Nicely done my friend.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/12/2017 8:55:00 AM
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Good point at the ending Phil, well done :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/12/2017 6:39:00 AM
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Such wisdom in your words Phil - a beautiful poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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