Morning

a morning so soft a blue jeans and milk white top she skips jumps and hops _____________________________ Kolkata, June 10, 2016

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Roses Roses

Date: 6/16/2016 10:07:00 PM

I love this poem, elegant simplicity but so powerful!

Probir Gupta
Date: 6/16/2016 10:14:00 PM

Thank you ...

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/16/2016 9:23:00 PM

How delightful! I am lovely king forward to reading all your morning poems. ; )

Probir Gupta
Date: 6/16/2016 10:15:00 PM

Thank you ...

Vladislav Raven

Date: 6/13/2016 10:03:00 AM

Hi Probir, a beautiful Senyu my friend.The words encompass your vision and the vision does come to our mind so easily. Sounds as if she is having a delightfully wonderful day. Such a cute vision Probir....Mike. Definitely a seven.

Probir Gupta
Date: 6/13/2016 12:45:00 PM

Thank you...

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/10/2016 6:43:00 AM

She sounds delightful.

Probir Gupta
Date: 6/10/2016 7:25:00 AM

And the humble poet is delighted...