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More Wine Please

Dinner for Two:
Red wine
Fine dine

Dessert for Two:
White wine
Cloud nine

Liquid Courage:
More wine
More spine

Liquid Stupidity:
Chug wine
Cross line

The Perfect Gift:
Bring wine
Be mine

Where It All Began:
Grape vine

The Next Morning:
Most whine

Copyright © Heather Ober

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  1. Date: 2/28/2013 1:51:00 PM
    Haha...ok...liquid stupidity, chug wine, cross line had me cracking up...I was picturing you downin' a bottle and raising hell...this was so fun to read!

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    Date: 3/1/2013 11:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Haha I'm glad you liked it! I have definitely been known to partake in a little wine once in awhile!
  1. Date: 2/10/2013 3:23:00 AM
    A worthy winner. And thank you for your comments. I really appreciated the feed back from your Competition. Charles.

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 1:39:00 AM
    Very creative and brilliant, Heather, Congrats!! Jag

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 9:01:00 PM
    Heather, Congratulations on a job well done, in Yasmin's footle fun contest:-) take care~PD

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 6:42:00 PM
    Glad to see you in the winner's circle. Congrats on your 1st place win, Heather! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 6:16:00 PM
    Cute, congrats on your win xxx

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 2:16:00 PM
    Bet you were not 'Sober-Ober' by the time you finished this, Heather...I'm sure you had a bottle available for each footle?...All were hilarious but the hangover footle is my favorite...Congratulations my friend! - Tim

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 12:26:00 PM
    Ohh these are good. I guess I should have given each of mine a title as well for them to be a real footle...per definition. Congrats on your win... More wine?? Raise a toast !!!

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 11:36:00 AM
    Congrad's on your fun win. Just loved these Heather. [I once was in love with a Steven Ober from Brooklyn NY!] Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 10:55:00 AM
    Yours was one of my favorites all along. BIG congrats in the contest.

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 9:40:00 AM
    Congratulations my dear poet friend Heather on your awesome win. I’ve truly enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you so much! Love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 8:02:00 AM
    Loved these first time round too well done Heather xx

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 12:50:00 PM
    Excellent title..grabbed my attention as well as this write of yours..I'll be on stand-by to see what you placed in the contest.."1st" regards INK-U-SCRIPT :)

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 12:33:00 AM
    Excellent poem..keep your thoughts flowing.Welcome to ps

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 5:24:00 PM
    thanks for your comments today. i always love reading what you have to say. I don't think I will find a poem of yours to read and I need to hurry off for the day, but hopefully you will have a new one up soon. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 2:41:00 PM
    lol, great footles - congrats on your wins, my friend

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 8:55:00 AM
    THIS is how it is DONE!!!! I love this series. You hit it out of the park, my friend!!!

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 1:56:00 AM
    I love this, such a light and easy read but very clever. It made me smile a lot especially the liquid stupidity verse. I am getting a lot of pleasure from your work, thank you.

  1. Date: 1/25/2013 6:36:00 AM
    brilliant love them xx

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 11:28:00 PM
    Yes very nice. Thoroughly enjoyed reading'em. Best of luck in the contest. Thanks for commenting on my haiku. -- Sean