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More Wine Please

Dinner for Two: Red wine Fine dine Dessert for Two: White wine Cloud nine Liquid Courage: More wine More spine Liquid Stupidity: Chug wine Cross line The Perfect Gift: Bring wine Be mine Where It All Began: Pre-wine Grape vine The Next Morning: Post-wine Most whine

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Painted Hunter

Date: 2/28/2013 1:51:00 PM

Haha...ok...liquid stupidity, chug wine, cross line had me cracking up...I was picturing you downin' a bottle and raising hell...this was so fun to read!

Heather Ober
Date: 3/1/2013 11:43:00 AM

Haha I'm glad you liked it! I have definitely been known to partake in a little wine once in awhile!

Charles Clive

Date: 2/10/2013 3:23:00 AM

A worthy winner. And thank you for your comments. I really appreciated the feed back from your Competition. Charles.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 2/10/2013 1:39:00 AM

Very creative and brilliant, Heather, Congrats!! Jag

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/9/2013 9:01:00 PM

Heather, Congratulations on a job well done, in Yasmin's footle fun contest:-) take care~PD

Kim Merryman

Date: 2/9/2013 6:42:00 PM

Glad to see you in the winner's circle. Congrats on your 1st place win, Heather! Love, Kim

Tim Ryerson

Date: 2/9/2013 2:16:00 PM

Bet you were not 'Sober-Ober' by the time you finished this, Heather...I'm sure you had a bottle available for each footle?...All were hilarious but the hangover footle is my favorite...Congratulations my friend! - Tim

Debra Squyres

Date: 2/9/2013 12:26:00 PM

Ohh these are good. I guess I should have given each of mine a title as well for them to be a real footle...per definition. Congrats on your win... More wine?? Raise a toast !!!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/9/2013 11:36:00 AM

Congrad's on your fun win. Just loved these Heather. [I once was in love with a Steven Ober from Brooklyn NY!] Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/9/2013 10:55:00 AM

Yours was one of my favorites all along. BIG congrats in the contest.

Len Gasun

Date: 2/9/2013 9:40:00 AM

Congratulations my dear poet friend Heather on your awesome win. I’ve truly enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you so much! Love/hugs, Leonora

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/9/2013 8:02:00 AM

Loved these first time round too well done Heather xx

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 2/1/2013 12:50:00 PM

Excellent title..grabbed my attention as well as this write of yours..I'll be on stand-by to see what you placed in the contest.."1st" regards INK-U-SCRIPT :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/28/2013 12:33:00 AM

Excellent poem..keep your thoughts flowing.Welcome to ps

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2013 5:24:00 PM

thanks for your comments today. i always love reading what you have to say. I don't think I will find a poem of yours to read and I need to hurry off for the day, but hopefully you will have a new one up soon. Luv, Andrea

Jack Horne

Date: 1/26/2013 2:41:00 PM

lol, great footles - congrats on your wins, my friend

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/26/2013 8:55:00 AM

THIS is how it is DONE!!!! I love this series. You hit it out of the park, my friend!!!

Even Flow

Date: 1/26/2013 1:56:00 AM

I love this, such a light and easy read but very clever. It made me smile a lot especially the liquid stupidity verse. I am getting a lot of pleasure from your work, thank you.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/25/2013 6:36:00 AM

brilliant love them xx

Sean Goodwin

Date: 1/24/2013 11:28:00 PM

Yes very nice. Thoroughly enjoyed reading'em. Best of luck in the contest. Thanks for commenting on my haiku. -- Sean

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/24/2013 10:03:00 PM

Good job, Heather! These are good! Love, Kim

Jack Ellison

Date: 1/24/2013 8:50:00 PM

Great "Footle Fun" my dear Heather! Got a kick out of it... hugs, Jack xox

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/24/2013 7:03:00 PM

This is fantastic! You my dear are a clever girl.

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/24/2013 6:38:00 PM

This is a wonderful write Heather! I really loved reading this delightful poem this evening! What a beautifully written piece! I loved in particular the 'Dessert for Two', "White wine, Cloud nine" part! Great Work!!