More To Me

More to me In the quietude of my quaint abode married with kin and what it had bestowed I sat and gazed at your comely face your eyes of sapphire and gleaming with grace then my eyes shift up recalling the past a flashback of youth and what it had cast to seek adventure where it could be found to create a quest and never a frown our decades have passed and we will revolve to reach the center of a boundless love your brilliant light continues to evolve I place you on a pedestal above I'll pander to your every whim my darling wife, with throes of thin and thin with you beside me, we will always win MTY More To Me Poetry Contest Sponsored by William Kekaula june 14 - July 12

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Winged Warrior

Date: 6/27/2019 9:21:00 PM

Congrats on the win Ralphy Boy...great read my friend...^WW^

Hilo Poet

Date: 6/27/2019 11:10:00 AM

I was well pleased with your appropriate phrasing and captivating use of diction, indeed a truly fine gem, my heartfelt thanks for your entry to my sponsored contest and indeed, my compliments to yours taking 3rd Place, Aloha ~ William

Ralph Sergi
Date: 6/27/2019 2:11:00 PM

Hi William: Thank you very much for your placement. I admire your poetry. It i unique.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 6/21/2019 7:41:00 AM

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