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More Thoughts Things Destined Things wished forgotten, have found beginnings to a conquering love dream... Awake Facing darkness - I move through finding light and freedom in my mind... Dream Fantasies Innocent kisses, found charm and desire. that sparkle an illusion of love... White Roses I will paint my life in blue, but I will pick white roses for you... 06/12/ 2014 By Lucilla M. Carrillo

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/13/2014 9:09:00 PM

My thoughts on this are, amazing, outstanding, perfection in poetry!!

Kelly Deschler

Date: 6/12/2014 10:59:00 PM

Very charming!.... I really enjoyed this second set of wonderful random thoughts. I really liked those last few lines about the white roses.... Another beautiful write, Lucilla!

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 6/13/2014 2:03:00 AM

Thank you for reading these too.

Tim Smith

Date: 6/12/2014 6:48:00 PM

How wonderful are these thoughts...I love white roses... Hugs Tim

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 6/12/2014 8:22:00 PM

hank you Tim, you can have a whole bunch of them. I have them in my garden. Blessings always....

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/12/2014 2:18:00 PM

- Beautiful .... especially the last two lines!! - Continue with your beautiful thoughts. - <3 to you my dear friend Lucilla! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 6/12/2014 2:59:00 PM

Thank you AnneLise, I couldn't think of nothing to write. I'm glad you like them.

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/12/2014 12:59:00 PM

i like that line, I paint my life in blue, but I will pick white roses for you. :) awesome Lucilla :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/12/2014 9:46:00 AM

Nice introspection with the self on fee,lings, Lucilla

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 6/12/2014 10:31:00 AM

Thank you so much Dr. Ram