More Than Just a Pretty Face

You’re more than just a pretty face, a gorgeous body, a passionate night You are the angel that takes my heart, grants it wings, and gives it flight I could never think of you, as simply beauty for me to view Your splendor has its place within yourself and on your face So never think my heart a shallow depth for you will see It’s the beauty of your heart, that builds the love inside of me Written in Arizona -2010

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/3/2013 6:33:00 AM

The ladies appreciate this one, you know your on he right track. Well done.

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper
Date: 8/3/2013 3:57:00 PM

Yeah, I was hoping they would, or at least one in particular...but that is neither here nor there LOL! This one is a recent one written in 2010 I believe, no later than 2011. MC

April Gabriella

Date: 7/23/2013 6:11:00 PM

Oh I love this! Such a wonderful tribute to the one you love. Beautiful words indeed. :)

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper
Date: 7/24/2013 8:26:00 AM

Thank you so much April! I'm so glad you enjoyed this one!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/21/2013 2:01:00 PM

:) Lovely and romantic...very very sweet! Me likes very much! :)

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper
Date: 7/21/2013 2:48:00 PM

Oh Eileen, you are too kind! Thank you! I tried to inbox you, though I'm not sure if the message went through.