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More Than An Old Lady

She's just an old lady with a slow walk There's a little pain where a smile once was She's not chatty, just a little small talk Her left eye don't see what her right one does But,ah my friend, she once was hell on wheels She sat the saddle like a cowboy might Preferred hard ridin' to automobiles Didn't much matter whether day or night She is a lot of what this country needs As hard as nails and then soft as a fawn I'm dying now and I've sown my seeds Someone be gentle to her when I'm gone She was a hardcase and all that covers And she was one of the world's great lovers September 1, 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/2/2016 4:35:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..Very descriptive and expressive about this special person..Thank you for dropping by..Yes, Georgia is special in that it has ocean front, mountains, hills, plains and low lying sandy land all in one state..The peaches are delicious here but the season has come and gone with a few being shipped in here from South Carolina..Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/5/2016 5:01:00 PM
North Georgia is a very lovely place..I am sure that I would have loved living in the mountainous area when I was young..Sara
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/2/2016 7:46:00 PM
Thank you, Sara..I lived and worked in Augusta, GA, and Vidalia, GA, and retired to Union County, Blairsville area in the mountains where we had a second home for 30 years. Loved it there and miss it every day...Larry

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