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I am at it, again, but I don't know why the devil in me should take such points as spelling and grammar as correctly being so NOTICEABLY HIDDEN from my view. After all, it's but a SMALL matter of GREAT importance to me when I have to RECONSTITUTE the REMAINING REGULATIONS REGALED by the WRITTEN word. But the CRUEL CRUX is the CONTEMPTIBLE COAGULATION of CREATIVITY that COINCIDES with the CONCENTRATION, CARE, and CONCERN at their COMING. WHILE WORDS WHISPER to me WITHOUT WARNING, their INDIFFERENT IMPORTANCE IMPLIES that I am INTO INESCAPABLE ISSUES with them. EMPTY MOUTHFUL of words, I know...Yet I am OFTEN OVERWHELMED WHEN WORDS WILLINGLY WROUGHT in thought are WOVEN into a PAPER FABRIC. How, silly of me to think that I should quit . I am just a dumbs _ _ t !! For Charles Henderson's "Free As You Choose" Contest.

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Date: 8/27/2010 6:58:00 AM
This I'm sure will be in the winners' circle, Daniel. Goes to my favs. Thanks for the comments. Peace, Audrey
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Date: 8/27/2010 6:54:00 AM
I think this poem is just wonderful, you sure got a good grasp of what Charles was seeking, dear heart~~
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Date: 8/25/2010 2:41:00 PM
Both oxymorons and alliterations are used cleverly and successfully....not seeming a bit contrived!! Well done, Daniel!! :)
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Date: 8/25/2010 10:35:00 AM
Hi Daniel, It looks great to me! But you are surely no dumby. It's witty and you made good use of the alliteration as well as the oxymorons. Soup mail coming soon. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/25/2010 8:33:00 AM
I am happy your poetry was among the poetry I had a chance to read today Daniel. Thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/25/2010 2:31:00 AM
hehe absolutely dig your entry for Charles's contest DC... All the best with this WITTY WRITE :)
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Date: 8/24/2010 10:39:00 PM
haha, I LOVE grammar because I teach it! What you should do is just write freely and then AFTER that, go thru with a fine tooth comb and play with it to make it be really great! Very nice! andrea
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Date: 8/24/2010 10:01:00 PM
SMiLES 2 THE SiLLiNESS, DANiEL*luv~SKAT
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Date: 8/24/2010 9:52:00 PM
Nice and a bit to honest, enjoyed,..p.d.
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