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Moonstruck Lovers

I sat on the jetty waiting as I did each Friday night The man in the moon winked at me as thin clouds were passing by My parents could not condone our love, his skin so dark, mine light Our steamy, summer love was intense and his approach was nigh Moonbeams peeked out and lit his trim figure as he crossed the sand Quickly I rose and crossed the rocks to greet him with an embrace Tenderly we kissed, then he withdrew, placed something in my hand He said, “We’ve waited far too long; our love they cannot erase” ‘Twas then the full moon lit the beach; I saw tears fall from his eyes A diamond ring he slipped on my finger, said, “We must elope” We were just teens but already knew that true love never dies “Without you in my life,” he whispered, “I simply cannot cope” I clung to him, crying aloud, knowing my parents I’d miss But we ignored their prejudice, opting for passionate bliss * For Constance’s Steamy, Summer Love contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/23/2014 8:55:00 PM
carolyn This is so passionate and full of love. Two young lovers who wont let anyone stand in their way of happiness. A nice story. Thank you for the great comment on my Butterfly poem.
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Date: 7/23/2010 3:02:00 PM
Beautiful! I wish I could write like you.
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Date: 7/20/2010 9:27:00 AM
Awesome write! Love it! Was this a true story?
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Date: 7/19/2010 7:27:00 AM
Congratulations Carolyn on your well deserved win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Steamy Summer Love". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/19/2010 1:19:00 AM
passionate love story!
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Date: 7/18/2010 7:59:00 PM
I had really liked this one first time I saw it. Congratulations on the top ten, Carolyn. Luv, Andrea ps. hope you are enjoying your little vacation!
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Date: 7/18/2010 11:57:00 AM
I love this Seafaress! A beautiful Sonnet. Warm congratulations on your win! Have a great vacation! Love, Audrey
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Date: 7/17/2010 12:31:00 PM
hi Carolyn :) Just dropping by to say that I finally popped that cork-- whew!! my bottled up write has been poured out to share--- thanks :) keeping my fingers crossed...-- nikko :)
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Date: 7/17/2010 6:52:00 AM
Beautiful love poem Carolyn, wow - you are a true writer >> good luck in Constance's contest >> James
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Date: 7/17/2010 6:36:00 AM
careful carolyn, they might read this at the country club.
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Date: 7/17/2010 3:14:00 AM
wonderful enrty, a winner in my eyes...pleasure to read..always Michael
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Date: 7/16/2010 8:01:00 PM
You have soup mail.
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Date: 7/16/2010 6:45:00 PM
this is really beautiful Carolyn :) and one can definitely feel those emotions of forbidden love here-- should do well in the contest-- I don't want to be judging this!! btw thanks for letting me know about my contest going back up- oops I think I wasn't able to lock it, thanks again & will definitely let you know if I update my entry for this contest :) -- thanks! -- nikko :)
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Date: 7/16/2010 5:46:00 PM
Hi Carolyn Your not alone like you i havent seen anyone in years its merely an obsivation of others, Please if you pen your poem of the sea Let me know so i may have the oppurtunity to read it.Cheers
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Date: 7/16/2010 5:16:00 PM
Hi Carolyn, Thank you and if you ask me you should write about it i would love to read it but is something very personal although i am sure your words will do it justice. Cheers Mate
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Date: 7/16/2010 4:15:00 PM
Very hot poem Carolyn...above the art of many, yet below your pen sheds Renoir's color scheme on your slip ! Loved it dear poet ! james
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Date: 7/16/2010 3:22:00 PM
Hi Carolyn Loved reading you comment on my poem Compass. Quite an adventure you had there Have you written about it ? Thank you for sharring , My purpose for writting is to try and stir emotion in the reader in the hope they can relate and we can find a common thread . Cheers
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Date: 7/16/2010 3:08:00 PM
Lovely write indeed, I loved the picture of passion and secret longing you painted, and thank you for the love regarding my win in the contest, I love the descriptions of the "Romeo and Juliet" relationship, where they simply long to be together, but something silly like skin color ignorance battles to keep them apart, love it!
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Date: 7/16/2010 9:27:00 AM
A nicely writte contribution to Constance'sd contest! Best of luck, Carolyn! And thank you for your kind commenst, just hearing Ana Moura's Fados (from Portugal) on YouTube!...Have a nice weekend. love, Gert
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Date: 7/16/2010 7:22:00 AM
Reminds me of a trip to St. Thomas when I was 18~ Sneaking out into the dark, the only lights were from another island ( St. John ) It was amazing! Thank you for this write!
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Date: 7/16/2010 5:00:00 AM
A beautiful new day, many wonderful new poems to read of which yours is among,the weekend is upon us. What more could I ask for? I hope you have a fantastic weekend filled with love, happiness, and lots of inspiration Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/16/2010 2:57:00 AM
Beauiful! Carolyn. A wnner for sure. Love, Lainie
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Date: 7/15/2010 9:57:00 PM
A wonderful entry to the contest. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 7/15/2010 8:58:00 PM
Hey, this is very nice, Carolyn. Glad to see you entered. Very romantic!!
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Date: 7/15/2010 7:08:00 PM
So charming and romantic!
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