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Moonstruck

Somewhere yonder When the fiery sun sets for the day, And the night, lurking in the wings of darkness, Sneaks upon the weary world with its murky glee, I go out with a crystal jar and collect glowworms. With stars for my eyes and winds for my wings, I surf upon the waves of the seas to rope in the footloose Moon and bring her home to set me ablaze with her warm silvery glow! "Simply beautiful#2" contest by Kelly Deschler

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Date: 4/26/2015 6:42:00 PM
Astonishing Abdul. Words that slide effortlessly together and collect in our thoughts as a warm silvery glow...Brilliant!
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Date: 4/25/2015 11:59:00 PM
nice to see this one on a winning list again. Love Linda
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Date: 4/23/2015 7:57:00 AM
Many many congrats for this 'simply beautiful' poem.... Regards : Archana
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Date: 4/20/2015 2:51:00 PM
Nicely done, Abdul !! Congratulations on your win !!!!
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Date: 4/20/2015 12:25:00 PM
Lovely images through your well-chosen words, Abdul. Congratulations on your top of the podium win! Sandra
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Date: 4/19/2015 7:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Abdul. A 7. See yours is poetry mine is conversation and storytelling. Blessings dear friend Eve
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Date: 4/19/2015 6:13:00 PM
Abdul, this is truly beautiful, a delight to read. Congratulations.
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Abdul Malik
Date: 4/19/2015 6:25:00 PM
Thanks a lot for your nice comments.
Date: 4/19/2015 5:43:00 PM
Many congrats on your top spot win Abdul this is very beautiful:-) Hugs jan xxxx
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Abdul Malik
Date: 4/19/2015 6:24:00 PM
Thanks Jan.
Date: 4/19/2015 5:38:00 PM
A marvelous poem filled with enchanting imagery. Beautifully written, Abdul! Congratulations on the first place win!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 4/19/2015 6:23:00 PM
Glad you liked it, Kelly. Thanks much.
Date: 12/10/2012 6:21:00 AM
Congratulations Abdul, a well deserved win xx
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Date: 12/9/2012 2:51:00 PM
Abdul, congratulations with your awesome win..in the Skitty Skat Contest.... thank you for everything. ~Always & Forever~ PD
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Date: 12/9/2012 2:26:00 PM
Congrats in my contest, . ~SKAT
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