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Moonlit Waves

Waves crashing the shore, Toes buried in the cold sand, Your warm arm on my shoulders. Dim light on your face, Reflecting off the ocean; Crescent waning on the sea. ———————————— Date: May 1, 2019 Best Sedoka - 577-577 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Lu Loo

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Date: 6/11/2019 3:21:00 PM
brilliant example of this form. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 6/10/2019 1:34:00 PM
- Congratulations on your beautiful winning poem, Briauna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/3/2019 8:10:00 PM
A lovely write Briauna,thanks for stopping by, best wishes in the Contest...
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/7/2019 3:20:00 PM
I appreciate that! Thank you!
Date: 5/3/2019 9:17:00 AM
Dreamy, romantic imagery galore in just a few lines, Briauna. G.L. in the contest! :) gw
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/3/2019 2:38:00 PM
Thank you!

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