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Moonlit Suite

Candle of Ishtar glints their eyes to taste where fireplace burns hushed tones, a smoky glide and dew anoints waxed mouths, sighs collide, like unspoken quakes, uttered not in haste. Lay bare night’s scent, unrelenting, unchaste peeled garment floats on a lounge of mantle; there, burst of seeds lodge in her ovule’s well replayed, released, on nipples’ buds down waist. Releasing logic, their notes pour as flame on creamy skin, through dusk-time ever bold and fingers crawl north to east without shame. Lovers entwining as one in rush of heat till tresses billow like moist sleet, to exclaim of Ishtar’s ripe tunes; groans of moonlit suite. ~ Petrarchan Sonnet rhymed abbaabba, followed by a 6-line ‘sestet’in cdcdcd ~Charlotte's Scorchers 11/25/2013

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Date: 12/11/2013 9:59:00 AM
nice one Nette.. Congratulations in "'Charlotte's Scorchers: Erotic/Sensual Poetry''...have a nice one... LUV LINDA
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Date: 12/8/2013 4:20:00 PM
so beautiful, Nette. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 12/7/2013 7:42:00 PM
lovely Nette a fine pen congrats on win Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 12/7/2013 7:40:00 PM
Nette this is beautiful not to mention such a complicated form! Congratulations on a fine win
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Date: 12/7/2013 6:44:00 PM
a glittering starburst of sensual images, nette - congrats on your win in my contest! :)
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Date: 12/7/2013 5:50:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/29/2013 5:49:00 AM
Awesome!Some people are asking for cold water below :)
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Date: 11/28/2013 8:17:00 AM
This is indeed a scorcher!
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Date: 11/27/2013 6:15:00 PM
And thus came Nette, with poetry from wet ! And did I mention, the prowling thoughts of your poets here on the Soup ! *smiles* Awesome write dear poet ! Have a blessed night and wonderful morning, ........Much love, james
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Date: 11/26/2013 7:04:00 PM
wonderful Nette full of emotion Shadow x smile hug gl in contest
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Date: 11/26/2013 3:42:00 PM
Hi Nette, A most lovely write from you as always.. Ken
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Date: 11/26/2013 10:49:00 AM
Reminds me of a Conan story! Stimulating work here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/26/2013 10:07:00 AM
BTW Thanks Nette for being such a faithful loyal friend of mine! Your kind loving words are always so much appreciated dear friend! Your "Moonlit Suite" is just another example of your wonderful poetic talents! Warm snuggly hugs, my dear Nette! xox
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Date: 11/26/2013 8:31:00 AM
Marvelous as always, Nette. :)
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Date: 11/26/2013 7:12:00 AM
burning beautiful piece dear friend
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Date: 11/26/2013 4:46:00 AM
Gulps! Damnnn; seductive in its movement from unspoken quakes to rush of heat.The attraction, the allure which makes you a poetess of passion without doubt." Lay bare night's scent... what the...whew!
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Date: 11/26/2013 1:34:00 AM
great one nette. Wonderful poem. (: ) Jenish.
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Date: 11/25/2013 2:49:00 PM
wow, awesome. Thanks, Nette - loved the sestet contest (sorry it's so late) x
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Date: 11/25/2013 2:39:00 PM
Passionate work that you have penned..Great effort in such detailed forms..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara
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Date: 11/25/2013 11:38:00 AM
..... WATER ..... ???? ... No, ice cold champagne in the best quality .... !!! - Of course in crystal glass .... - Hot, hot, hot .... - Beautiful, Nette ! <3 <3 <3 - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/25/2013 10:26:00 AM
Can I get a fan & a glass of cold water? Cool. Thank you! That "releasing logic" line is the loudest line. Incredible.
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Date: 11/25/2013 10:19:00 AM
"Releasing logic", exactly!. The expansion of being sustained in vibrance invades my senses. Passionate flame done without crossing the line leaves me to imagine more than I can. Ice, please, lady of poetry's desire!
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Date: 11/25/2013 10:07:00 AM
It's not Ishtar although she must have put a spell on this heated night. I must say you are the Godess of Sensuaity and Passion! Flows so well, describing an unstoppable force of attraction and sweet ache elegantly bursting all floral seeds of delight!
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Date: 11/25/2013 9:54:00 AM
a beautiful sensual melody Nette....best wishes
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Date: 11/25/2013 8:47:00 AM
Wow, HOT, this really is a scorcher my friend, and a very good one too! I am impressed by the wondrous way you wrote this poem, I like the Petrarchan Sonnet...it is similar the Italian Sonnet no? What a fantastic and remarkable piece, Great Work!!
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