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Moonlight Veil

A world away, and miles apart,
The heavens hold a clue.
When burning love shines from afar,
reflecting off the moon.
Passion seized by moonlight means,
you’re awake in someone else’s dreams…
Journey far, but don’t forget-
that my sunrise… is your sunset.
A breath of midnight air exhaled
with mystic intuition.
Embracing in that moonlight veil,
passion’s sweet submission…
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/12/2018 11:45:00 AM
Sooooooo beautiful! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 6/12/2018 2:04:00 PM
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Date: 7/27/2015 10:51:00 PM
Powerful words n wonderful expressions Cole n here u r wid a fine win! Big congrats!
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Date: 7/28/2015 8:13:00 AM
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Date: 7/27/2015 10:31:00 PM
A beautiful, romantic poem, Cole, with such lovely flowing lines...congrats on your well-deserved win! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 7/28/2015 8:13:00 AM
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Date: 7/28/2015 8:13:00 AM
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Date: 7/27/2015 10:07:00 PM
Lovely write, and should be sent to someone that you love. Go on, Cole, give it wings. Congratulations. Viv
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Date: 7/28/2015 8:13:00 AM
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Date: 7/27/2015 7:34:00 PM
Cole, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/28/2015 8:13:00 AM
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Date: 7/27/2015 5:36:00 PM
Cole, congrats on your win with this lovely write! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/28/2015 8:14:00 AM
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Date: 7/27/2015 12:22:00 PM
Cole, Congratulations on the win. SKAT
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Date: 7/28/2015 8:14:00 AM
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Date: 8/20/2014 10:45:00 AM
Cole, , thank you for the reply Always~ Linda"
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Date: 8/20/2014 9:58:00 AM
Cole,, congratulations with your winning poem... Always~ Linda
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Date: 8/20/2014 10:40:00 AM
Thanks so much Linda...
Date: 8/20/2014 5:53:00 AM
Congratulations on a well penned poem, Cole
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Date: 8/20/2014 7:48:00 AM
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Date: 8/20/2014 12:33:00 AM
Beautiful write! Congratulations on a well-deserved win! Regards, Kika
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Date: 8/20/2014 7:48:00 AM
Thank you so much.
Date: 8/19/2014 8:50:00 PM
Well done and great win. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/20/2014 7:49:00 AM
Thanks Joyce...
Date: 8/19/2014 4:16:00 PM
It's a wonderful poem. It actually matches kind of with the theme of my poem on this same list!! congratulations for your win.
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Date: 8/19/2014 6:59:00 PM
Thanks. I will go check it out...
Date: 8/19/2014 1:30:00 PM
Hey Everyone! When I said 'Off you go now' I didn't know you were totally going to blow my mind, not all of you at once! I am honored to have read your poetry. Thank You for entering my contest! Off You Go Now, Judy
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Date: 8/19/2014 6:59:00 PM
Thanks so much!
Date: 6/21/2014 3:42:00 PM
Exquisitely portrayed with sweet emotion; loved it. Lizzie
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Cole Banner
Date: 6/23/2014 7:42:00 PM
Glad you liked this one....

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