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Moonlight Invitation

* Awake in dream time I slip on restless slippers, tiptoe from slumber, * at the moon’s invitation, delivered with dappled light. * Night embraces me, and moonlight reassures me, giving me comfort, * knowing that somewhere, out there, you dream under the same moon. :For Tracie's Contest: Moonlight Dream

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/2/2012 2:54:00 PM
Smile ˜ A thousand other boys could never reach you, how could I have been the one * I saw the world spin beneath you, and scatter like ice from the spoon that was your world ˜ Smile ˜ One of my most favourite poets, poetess' and girls in the whole wide world * What I would give to but behold Your Priceless Lovely Beauty, Sleeping amid the the moonbeams dancing for joy to touch Your Light * Happy New Year My Beautiful Carrie * My Love Unto You, Beyound The Ends of Time * Forevermore; John!:) ˜
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Date: 12/30/2011 9:29:00 PM
Congratulations on winning in Tracie's contest. This is one I missed.
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Date: 12/6/2011 11:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Moonlight Dreams" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/4/2011 2:44:00 PM
Hi Carrie! Congratulations on a very fine win...I enjoyed reading this. Love, Annalise
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Date: 12/4/2011 8:50:00 AM
Very nice Carrie. Enjoyed. Congratulations
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Date: 12/3/2011 11:24:00 AM
I sure would love to accept this moonlight invitation, Carrie :) I like your concept for this and found it unique :) Makes me want to tiptoe but happily accept, and yes how awesome for us to be dreaming under that same moon :) Thanks for your sweet comments in my poem :D hugs to you!
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Date: 12/2/2011 10:10:00 PM
Awesome Carrie... good luck in the contest... enjoyed stopping by tooo read your poem~;-) always,..p.d.
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Date: 12/2/2011 4:36:00 PM
Yes, that is an inspiring time to know that the ones we love that are away can enjoy the same moon, sunrise, and sunset..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Sara
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Date: 12/2/2011 3:42:00 PM
very dreamy gal friend! light & love
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Date: 12/2/2011 12:46:00 AM
Beautiful invitation under the same moon, dear Carrie! How are you doing these days? Thanks for your comment on my blog! Love, Iolanda
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Date: 12/1/2011 10:34:00 PM
I always have loved that theme of "under the same moon" and the way you show it here is DIVINE.
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Date: 12/1/2011 6:43:00 PM
What a lovely write Carrie! I really enjoyed reading your poem tonight! I loved the dream world invitation that you have given your dream self! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 12/1/2011 3:22:00 PM
So lovely, Carrie. You have a unique way of expressing emotions and touching the hearts of readers. This is an awesome entry for Tracie's contest and I expect to see it placing very high! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/1/2011 2:26:00 PM
* "Another Beautiful Vista Amid Poetics Magnificent Moonlight Beauty * My Dear Precious, Blessed & Beautiful Carrie * This Would Be But A Loving Metaphor * Absolutely Beautiful Painting * My Luv, Forever & Always * Sarah." *
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