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Moonlight Game

stars come in silence shy moon peeps in thick foliage playing hide-and-seek 3 July 2021 A Brian Strand ( July 3) Poetry Contest 1st place

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Valsa George

Date: 6/3/2022 4:36:00 AM

This playfulness, I love !

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/16/2021 9:16:00 AM

So playful! Line said it too; but it was the best word so I am reiterating it.

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/21/2021 3:41:00 AM

love the 'playful' imagery ~

Honestly J.T.

Date: 7/17/2021 2:58:00 PM

Cool poem; -JT

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/8/2021 6:54:00 AM

Lovely haiku. Love it. God bless you my friend. Love, Gina

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 7/6/2021 4:02:00 AM

A cute moonlight game of hide and seek... Enjoyed reading dear friend... Have a blessed day... Hugs... ~ Ani

Jan Allison

Date: 7/4/2021 12:09:00 PM

what a charming haiku JCB. Many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2021 9:18:00 AM

cute one!! Congrats for the win

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/3/2021 9:25:00 AM

Dear JCB, your gifted and golden pen portrays stunning nighttime beauty. Vivid yet velvety imagery glimpsing the shy moon. Splendid! Warmest wishes, my dear friend.. ~Susan