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Moonlight Firefly

Like chasing a firefly in the moonlight so beautiful, so elusive the feelings I have for you tonight so strong, so intrusive your aura, an invisible bright white light blindingly obtrusive I cannot bring myself to plight too bashful and reclusive

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2015 5:24:00 AM

Markkel,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) As I hope one day you will follow and give me a few poetry pointers. We're Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with your New Poet Friend! @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/7/2015 11:37:00 AM

- Welcome to P Soup, with your first poem Markkel - Always nice to meet new "poets" - I look forward to more write from you in the future - Happy weekend :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Markkel Malloy
Date: 3/7/2015 4:54:00 PM

Thanks, you have great poems btw

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/6/2015 11:10:00 PM

A well written poem and very expressive, too! I enjoyed it :)

Markkel Malloy
Date: 3/7/2015 10:49:00 AM

Your comment means a lot, thanks