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Moonlight

A white coat in my courtyard at night, As quiet as the shine of the fresh snow, Moon reverberates but sun's luminous light, A smuggler's enemy is silvery moonlight ! A gleaming sparkle on a dreaming face, Reaching for the moon and getting over, Drilling deep into sea, turning noctilucine, A perception that it's a moonlight !!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/3/2014 2:22:00 AM
A delight to read the poem. Congrats on the win, Dr. Upma
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Date: 5/2/2014 8:11:00 PM
I really liked the line, "Reaching for the moon and getting over". A dreamer should never stop dreaming! A very good write, Dr. Upma. Congratulations on your win!.... Thank you very much for the nice comments on my poem. :)
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Date: 5/2/2014 9:57:00 AM
Wow - really liked this, thanks for the comment on mine as well :)
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Date: 5/1/2014 7:05:00 PM
nice win, Lady, Congrats & Hugs ------ Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/5/2014 9:47:00 AM
very interesting imagery in this one!! I really like it!
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