Moonlight

Hard falls the dark night Sister moon ascends the heights Moonbeams filter through

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Bawa Talwar

Date: 4/25/2017 6:26:00 PM

A good Haiku on moonlight. It soothes the atmosphere.well written. Kindly review my works to

Ra R

Date: 12/4/2009 10:32:00 AM

beautiful...i've been thinking of trying a haiku ... love this

Donna Golden

Date: 11/27/2009 7:40:00 PM

Is this going into Raul's next contest? It should! Nice haiku, Audrey! By the way, more Soup Mail! Hugs, Donna

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/26/2009 6:04:00 AM

Beautiful haiku Audrey and hope u entered this one in Raul's new contest ... its a winner... enjoy your T. Day and thankxxx for your loving comments on my poetry.. much appreciated and keep that creative pen of your flowing for us to enjoy.. blessings ... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Donna Golden

Date: 11/25/2009 9:04:00 PM

Lovely tribute to lunar beauty, Audrey! PS Soup Mail! Hugs, Donna

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/23/2009 3:17:00 PM

Nicely done Haiku. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

James Fraser

Date: 11/23/2009 10:23:00 AM

Terrific Haiku Audrey, what a lovely image your words picture, and how i would love to see it >> James

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/22/2009 5:52:00 PM

Really like the wording of this Haiku, Very good. Have not tried one of those yet but will soon. Looks like fun. Thank you for your encouraging words, Audrey. God bless.

Moonbee Canady

Date: 11/21/2009 12:41:00 PM

Beautiful ... Absolutely Beautiful... (of Course, I Love MoonBeams, its something so etheral about them to me (smile)... MoonBee

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/21/2009 10:52:00 AM

Such a beautiful image you have created in this excellent haiku, Audrey. Great work! Love, Carolyn