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Moonchild

outside she dances/ wind prancin along side of her curves/ she swirves and the breeze wraps around her bust/ that lust literally busts/ she crys out in moves hear me groove/ it's a must to fuss these feelings/ so smooth she's smothered with thoughts/ she sings in distraught/ with her eyes so indulged/ they bulge as she prys through her surroundings/ she tries to live the life of legends/ who sought and fought for the world be their heavens/ so she hereby stand sitting out/ She must be a little tea pot her words are bubbling/ so here they come out this young womans spout/ and they sound troubling trying to figure her meanings whereabouts/ so she still talk and question till her lips & mouth turn drought/ let she continue to recognize and point out the tension/ in a dimension unyet kown to the current peoples obsession/ with not the world but techonology progression/ but she dares not stress for she knows she's blessed/ so here she dances that's me and my words in movement expressed./

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Date: 8/6/2014 7:49:00 AM
Awesome one..Enjoyed the imagery..Thanks for sharing
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Date: 1/30/2014 6:44:00 PM
Loved the imagery! Made a very vivid picture in my mind
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Date: 1/31/2014 3:37:00 PM
Thank you very much! :)
Date: 1/16/2014 11:57:00 PM
Hi Maxine - beautiful poem. Your description and imagery of the 'moonchild' brings the poem to life and speaks of strength of character. Very well written. I would like to extend my hand in welcome to the PoetrySoup community. There’s a lot to learn from each other here and hopefully you will have a great time while at it. Feel free to check out my poems when you can. I am looking forward to reading more from you. Vicky.
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B. Maxine Revolution
Date: 1/31/2014 3:37:00 PM
Very kind words Vicky thank you so much. I'll be stopping by your page soon :)
Date: 1/13/2014 3:59:00 AM
Cool poem! Clever rhyming,
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B. Maxine Revolution
Date: 1/31/2014 3:37:00 PM
Thanks Jeromy!
Date: 1/5/2014 3:34:00 AM
an interesting poem. perhaps dancing is a good therapy. Thanks for sharing your work. Jancarl
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