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Moonbeams Acrostic

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Moonbeams dance On mirrored lake Opalescent pearls of Nocturnal beauty Bright luminescent moon Eclipsed by fluffy clouds All of a sudden… Marshmallow clouds float by Shining pearls gleam once more 15th June 2016

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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/17/2016 7:46:00 PM
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very pretty, Jan. What inspired this one?
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Mama Bear
Date: 6/17/2016 6:15:00 PM
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Wonder how marshmallows and whipped cream turn Just think of those calories but what a way to go hugs Edith
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Joanna Daniel
Date: 6/17/2016 12:50:00 AM
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Nice choice of words:) Beautiful acrostic:)
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/17/2016 7:28:00 AM
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Thanks Jo:-) hugs Jan xx
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Casarah Nance
Date: 6/16/2016 1:31:00 PM
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Mmm I just want to take a bite of those marshmallow clouds :) nice acrostic!
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/17/2016 7:29:00 AM
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Careful cas there are so many around they are quite fattening lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Mark Woods
Date: 6/16/2016 4:38:00 AM
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Simply awesome. I know it's a good poem when I have a big grin break out! : )
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/17/2016 7:30:00 AM
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Aww thanks Mark that is a lovely comment. I am glad you liked my musings:-) hugs Jan xx
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/15/2016 5:10:00 PM
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Lovely acrostic, Jan. Nice word picture. Barry.
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/17/2016 7:30:00 AM
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Thanks Barry:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tim Smith
Date: 6/15/2016 4:35:00 PM
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Oh how nice Jan. It paints a pretty picture.
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/17/2016 7:31:00 AM
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Thanks Tim:-)Living surrounded by the sea I have great inspiration hugs jan xx
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 6/15/2016 3:40:00 PM
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a lovely acrostic, jan! i enjoyed...
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/17/2016 7:31:00 AM
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Thanks Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 6/15/2016 2:41:00 PM
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Jan, this is so beautiful and I am loving it 7. ..
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/17/2016 7:32:00 AM
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Thanks Constance I am glad you enjoyed my musings:-) hugs Jan xx
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Joe Dimino
Date: 6/15/2016 7:17:00 AM
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Very beautiful, Jan; lovely image and words!
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/15/2016 7:21:00 AM
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Thanks so much Joe I live close to the sea and love moonlit nights:-) hugs Jan xx

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