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Moon Sways

Mood of moon... how you eclipse me with your solemn and joyful revolutions. Shine on me always that I might explore life’s beauty in the darken sky. Awaken within me your gentle touch that I may forget the harshness of day-life. Mellow the tones of my daily living with softened shades that are forgiving. Weaken the shadows the day chased around as I look upon your face may peace be found. Mood of moon… How you inspire me with your glowing face shining above. Shine on me always that my pen may explore poetry within a poem your reward. © Debra Squyres 4/6/15

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Emile Pinet

Date: 5/13/2015 8:24:00 AM

The words are magical and beautifully expressed in a sea of swirling phrases that dance upon the tongue. The imagery and shear beauty of your words are impressive. Emile.

Robert Johnson

Date: 5/4/2015 11:02:00 AM

Hello Debra, Hoping your shadows are friendly and your pace is smooth. I've read this a few times now. I have just been in kind of a funky mood lately. Hence not commenting. This really is a wonderful communing with that big night light. Peace. :)

Skat A

Date: 4/30/2015 7:21:00 PM

Why Debra, I have not seen you on here, in forever:). Nice seeing you online. I love the way the moon is inspiring to your soul. I can't seek a poem about the moon as good as you have. No wonder you name the poem, Moon Sway... Thanks for sharing this mood the moon has bestowed upon you. Love SKAT

Hannington Mumo

Date: 4/23/2015 10:26:00 AM

You are a poet...You deserve more than just a 7, so 7+++!

Kevin Leake

Date: 4/6/2015 12:40:00 PM

I love the way you have written this Debra, A really lovely piece on our moon, it is truly mysterious!!! Best Wishes Kevin

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/6/2015 12:11:00 PM

- The moon has a huge impact on us humans - And the moon is mysterious and beautiful ..... - Thanks for the wonderful poem, Debra! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)