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Moon Stages Minichu

Moonlight shivers On my cold, rattling pane to wake Me from my own sleep's winter. The condolences in this season's life— She's someone else in bristling glow; To draw me out, she takes her time. A frost crescendo Dropping shadows Hint of coming snow. Moonlight shivers— She's someone else in bristling glow, Hint of coming snow.

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Date: 11/16/2023 9:42:00 AM
Paige, your mesmerizing and exquisite use of imagery enraptured my senses, transporting me to a vivid world where the very essence of each season materialized before my mind's eye. Your poetic voice, endowed with a rare and exceptional talent, is an enchanting gift to behold.
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Date: 11/16/2023 4:17:00 AM
Your imagery was so captivating and beautiful, Paige. I could feel and see the seasons in my mind's eye. You have a special and gifted poetic voice. I enjoyed reading this creation. Have a lovely day, Sara
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Date: 11/15/2023 10:13:00 PM
Frost crescendo i love the word pairing there. And the imagery throughout this that you’ve painted is so very creative and captivating. You have a way with words beautiful paige. Keep sharing these with us. Sending you light today and always
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Date: 11/15/2023 8:16:00 PM
a transcendent experience
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