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Moon Spoon

glittering hushed night under ardent solace moon submissive embrace 12/18/2016

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Date: 12/23/2016 1:35:00 AM
A beautiful Senyru, Eve:) hope to see this high on the winner's list:)
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Date: 12/21/2016 11:08:00 PM
Loved the contrast in the adjectives for both night and moon. Good luck in the contest, Eve!
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Date: 12/21/2016 11:22:00 PM
Thank you, Tamal, Hugs Eve
Date: 12/20/2016 12:05:00 PM
oh my this is just so good EVE. So glad to see you are always at your finest, even when just posting a haiku. A delight to read. LINDA
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Date: 12/20/2016 2:20:00 PM
Hi, Santa's Girl, Love your visit and you inspiring compliment. Sure hope you are doing well :) Merry Christmas and happy holidays Hugs Eve
Date: 12/19/2016 11:59:00 PM
I really like how you did it. A true Ku or Senryu!!!
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Date: 12/20/2016 12:23:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea , a complement that is very inspiring to me Merry Christmas and happy holidays Hugs Eve
Date: 12/19/2016 9:01:00 PM
Beautiful haiku Eve...Best wishes
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Date: 12/20/2016 12:25:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph ,for the inspiring complement :) Merry Christmas and happy holidays Hugs Eve
Date: 12/19/2016 8:35:00 PM
Love under the moon...and a sensuous senryu to boot...how romantic...a winner for me...god bless and happy holidays***...*^WW^*
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Date: 12/20/2016 12:26:00 AM
Thank you, ^WW^ , for the inspirational complement :) Merry Christmas and happy holidays Hugs Eve
Date: 12/19/2016 1:01:00 PM
I feel the warm embrace of love here. I have missed reading your lovely words. Merry Christmas and may you always love generously!
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Date: 12/20/2016 12:27:00 AM
Thank you, David , for your visit it has been a long time and the inspiring complement :) Merry Christmas and happy holidays Hugs Eve
Date: 12/19/2016 9:43:00 AM
Beautifully romantic Eve. This one touched my heart.
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Date: 12/19/2016 10:53:00 AM
Thank you, Chris, Merry Christmas and happy holidays Hugs Eve
Date: 12/19/2016 4:05:00 AM
oh how romantic Eve this is so beautiful:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/19/2016 10:54:00 AM
Thank you,Jan, Merry Christmas and happy holidays Hugs Eve
Date: 12/19/2016 4:05:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Eve :) - Good luck in the contest :) - Best wishes for a peaceful and beautiful Christmas to you and your family :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/19/2016 10:56:00 AM
Thank you, Anne -Lise, for the good luck :-) may you and your family have a blessed holiday. Hugs Eve
Date: 12/18/2016 10:32:00 PM
A moonlit Senryu gleaming with such lovely emotions. Good luck, Eve
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Date: 12/19/2016 10:58:00 AM
Thank you so very much may you have a blessed Merry Christmas and happy holidays
Date: 12/18/2016 9:18:00 PM
OHHHHH....love the submissive embrace. Ardent...another lovely word. Loved this, dear. Beautiful
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Date: 12/18/2016 10:16:00 PM
Thank you, Eileen, I am glad you like it I not very good at romance :-) Merry Christmas and happy holidays Hugs Eve
Date: 12/18/2016 9:15:00 PM
My muse has got nothing for this contest. What you wrote is most lovely, Eve. All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 12/18/2016 10:14:00 PM
Hi, CayCay, maybe my poem might encourage you :-) my work hasn't been the best. Merry Christmas and happy holidays Hugs Eve

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