Moon Spoon

MOON SPOON gossamer moon shine boat rocks gentle back and forth trees sway in the breeze 12/17/2016

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Afzal Nusker

Date: 12/28/2016 7:00:00 AM

A Haiku, beautifully swaying in the moon shine. Congratulations!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/28/2016 7:24:00 AM

Thank you, Afzal!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/28/2016 3:38:00 AM

Congrats on a lovely win, Kim:)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/28/2016 7:24:00 AM

Thank you, Jo!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/27/2016 7:51:00 PM

A lovely vision to behold Kim! Congratulations on your wonderful win! ; ) 7

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/27/2016 11:05:00 PM

Thank you, Connie!

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/27/2016 6:59:00 PM

Lovely imagery, Kim. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/27/2016 11:05:00 PM

Thank you, Sandra! Hugs! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2016 5:17:00 PM

beautiful, Kim. Congrats on the win

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/27/2016 11:06:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea! xo

Doug Vinson

Date: 12/27/2016 1:48:00 PM

Kim, such a beautiful overall image. To focus in on one line - "gossamer moon shine" - the 'M' sounds repeat, the N at the end of 'moon' sets us up for the one in "shine" just as the 'S" sound from gossamer is repeated. A perfect line, a perfect phrase, big part of what poetry is. : )

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/27/2016 3:54:00 PM

Thanks so much, Doug!