Moon Rising Andaree

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Written on April 12, 2024

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Always, she rises like the heart who feels stirred, twilight has had its chance to be heard, reflecting the joy inside, lost hearts gentle bride, moon glowing, guide, light flowing, behind clouds, she’ll glide, in deep blue skies, she’ll abide, she’s the one an anxious heart preferred, Always, she rises like the heart who feels stirred.

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/13/2024 1:16:00 AM

Very beautiful and soothing poetry.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/12/2024 6:14:00 AM

Loved the physical shape of your andaree. I found your words so compelling and beautiful with smooth flowing rhymes. An on top of that, your poem contains some soft and lovely images. Best wishes with the contest. hugs and blessings, Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/12/2024 1:36:00 AM

A pleasure to read, dear Regina. An andaree that is rife with brilliant rhymes and so easy to read. Blessings and best for a win.

Ink Empress

Date: 4/12/2024 12:39:00 AM

This is so beautiful!!! I love the rhymes and the shape of your andaree, and how it flows just seamlessly! Inspired to try this form too dear gina. You did an exceptional take! So impressive and impeccable! So deeply touching. Best wishes for the contest, pleasure reading you always. Sending you light always